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Sie haben sich für den kostenlosen E-Mail-Newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" angemeldet.
Damit wir mit der kostenlosen Belieferung beginnen können,
bitten wir Sie nun noch, Ihren Auftrag zu bestätigen.

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You have registered for the free e-mail
newsletter "Natural modern medicine".
In order for us to proceed, we ask you to confirm your order.
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Natural modern medicine or: current natural medicine
Validated by Lein - 8 sausis 2010 13:43





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7 sausis 2010 14:57

Lein
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Hi Gamine

'Sie' is used as the polite form of (singular) you here. I saw you translated it this way in the last sentence, but the first one says 'they' instead

My suggestion:

You have registered for the free electronic newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" (or your translation which is fine).
In order for us to start sending it, free, we ask you to confirm your order.

What do you think?
I am not completely happy with 'start sending it', but I think 'supply' is not the best word here either. Once I have started a poll we can see if anyone else has a suggestion

7 sausis 2010 18:07

gamine
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Hi Lein. I have edited the last line as you suggested. Find it much better.

Couldn't we use:"proceed" here instead of "supply" or "start sending it"?

7 sausis 2010 19:53

Lein
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Yes, that's a good suggestion! I have edited. I have also removed 'free' because I think the first sentence makes it clear already that the newsletter will be free. Let me know if you don't agree!

7 sausis 2010 20:09

gamine
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Of course, I do , dear Lein. You're completely right.
Thanks for your help.

8 sausis 2010 00:18

gbernsdorff
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current natural medicine ?

8 sausis 2010 12:06

Delfin71
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They have currently signed up for free e-mail newsletter, "Natural Medicine".
Before we can start with the free supply,
please confirm your order.