Gelenler - arssim

Hi Arssim,

Can you write what you think is wrong with this translation: http://www.cucumis.org/tlumaczenie_8_t/zobacz-tlumaczenie_v_129333.html

Thanks in advance,
Inulek

http://www.cucumis.org/tlumaczenie_8_t/zobacz-tlumaczenie_v_144033.html

Could you tell, how you would improve this one ?
Thx,
Inulek