Vertimas - Prancūzų-Anglų - Clandestines N0 2

"appointments"
despite this little mistake, translation seems fine to me, what do you think Lilian?

CC: lilian canale

I edited that 's', but I'd like Tantine to have a look at this translation, OK?

Merci à tous, voici le poème dans sa version anglaise :

Clandestine

In the hollow
Of a silver wave,
Young bodies
Run aground,

Dreams,
Froth smuggler,
Between your continents
The sea
Has its backwash,

Beyond
Its new clandestine borders
The sea
Has disastrous appointments.

It sounds a little awkward, although I can't really tell what's wrong with it...