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Siempre seras la niña que me llena el alma como...
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Originalo kalba: Ispanų

Siempre seras la niña que me llena el alma
como un mar inquieto como un mar en calma
siempre tan lejana como el horizonte
gritando en el silencio tu nombre en mis labios
solo queda el eco de mi desengaño
sigo aqui en mi sueño de seguirte amando
Pastabos apie vertimą
In British or Amirican Languge :)
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You will always be...
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Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Anglų

You will always be the girl that fulfills my soul
like a stormy sea, like a calm sea
always as far away as the horizon
screaming in the silence your name on my lips
just the echo of my disappointment remains
I stay here in my dream of continuing to love you
Validated by lilian canale - 3 balandis 2009 16:30





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3 balandis 2009 01:04

lilian canale
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Hola ellasevia,

Good to see you around

This is a very good translation, except for the last two lines. They should read:
"just the echo of my disappointment remains
I stay here in my dream of keeping loving you"

However, since the original is rhymed, I'd like you to release your poetic vein and try to get some rhyme in English too.

Will you try?

3 balandis 2009 01:48

lilian canale
Žinučių kiekis: 14972
I see you won't.

Here's my try, then:

You will always be the girl fulfilling my soul
like a restless sea, like a sea when lull
always as distant as the horizon,
yelling in the silence your name on my lips.
Just the echo of my disillusion is left
In my dream of keeping loving you, I rest.


What do you think?

3 balandis 2009 01:50

ellasevia
Žinučių kiekis: 145
That sounds great. Sorry for not getting back sooner. The only thing I would say sounds better in English is "In my dream of continuing to love you" instead of "n my dream of keeping loving you."

3 balandis 2009 01:53

lilian canale
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Yeah, you're right. It sounds smoother

3 balandis 2009 01:55

ellasevia
Žinučių kiekis: 145
Okay, I will change it to your version.

3 balandis 2009 01:58

lilian canale
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You don't have to. Your version is at the poll. I just wanted to try the rhyme. I can't help it Every time a poem shows up I don't resist

3 balandis 2009 02:06

ellasevia
Žinučių kiekis: 145
Oh, okay. It won't let me anyways.

3 balandis 2009 11:47

xristi
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lejana -> distant

seguirte amando -> keep loving you