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翻译 - 汉语(简体)-英语 - "åŒå星" 天上的星星数ä¸æ¸… æœ€äº®çš„æ˜¯ä½ ä¸ç®¡æœ‰å¤šè¿œæˆ‘æ„¿æ„ æ”¾å¼ƒä¸€åˆ‡å¯»æ‰¾ä½ ...当前状态 翻译
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讨论区 歌曲  本翻译"仅需意译"。 | "åŒå星" 天上的星星数ä¸æ¸… æœ€äº®çš„æ˜¯ä½ ä¸ç®¡æœ‰å¤šè¿œæˆ‘æ„¿æ„ æ”¾å¼ƒä¸€åˆ‡å¯»æ‰¾ä½ ... | | 源语言: 汉语(简体)
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| Among the uncountable stars in the sky | | 目的语言: 英语
Twin Stars
Among the uncountable stars in the sky
You are the brightest one
No matter how far you are
I wish I gave up everything to follow you
I don't need time to prove to me
Because I surely know your joys and pains
I can feel them all
We are like twin stars
We are in the sky facing each other
A linking thread between us in the dark night
The two of us can live only together
Two hearts
Who have the same belief.
| | Sorry if you don't like my version. At least now you know the meaning and can work on the lines a little more and make them nicer. The line 13: in the original is "unite", it sounded beter to me "together". |
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2008年 四月 2日 01:52 | | | I am not English expert, but may I suggest?
"give up on" without "on"
"two hearts who" changed into "two hearts that"
"No need that time shall prove to me " changed to "I don't need testimony by time"
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2008年 四月 2日 05:38 | | | Small alterations to an almost-perfect translation:
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"Twin Stars"
Among the uncountable stars in the sky
You are the brightest one
No matter how far you are
I want to give up everything to follow you
I don't need time to prove to me
That it's certainly true
Because I know your joys and pains
I can feel them all
We are like twin stars
We are in the sky facing each other
A linking thread between us in the dark night
The two of us can live only together
Two hearts
Who have the same belief.
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Anyway, a very good translation overall!  | | |
2008年 四月 2日 18:12 | | | Ian, I see your mother tongue is English. I thought that "facing each other" means more like "having something in contradictory", am I wrong?
"That's certainly true/Because I know your joys and pain": I don't think it is like this because there is that "keyi", so it is "I can surely know..." , what do you think?
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2008年 四月 5日 06:17 | | | Hi Oana,
In English, "opposing each other" would mean "disagreeing about something," but "facing each other" would simply mean "standing/sitting/being face to face (e.g. usually looking at each other?)."
As for the second part, I was connecting it to its previous line, but maybe you're right; that it should be connected to the line following it...? 
Hmmm...I don't understand that part of the lyrics very well... | | |
2008年 四月 5日 11:05 | | | |
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