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Très bien, il n'était pas du genre à se laisser...
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Добавлено elammar
Язык, с которого нужно перевести: Французский

Très bien, il n'était pas du genre à se laisser impressionner. Je me suis assise à côté de lui pour lui montrer mon pied.
- Je me suis coupée tout à l'heure ...
- Et pourtant il n'y a aucune trace de coupure. Comment est-ce que ... ?
Avant qu'il ait eu le temps de finir, je lui ai pris la main et l'ai posée contre mon ventre.
- Tu sens la différence ?
Ses doigts ont parcouru ma peau et se sont arrêtés à l'endroit où aurait dû se trouver mon nombril.
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Very well, he wasn't the type to be easily impressed
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Английский

Перевод сделан Kai Tachikawa1
Язык, на который нужно перевести: Английский

Okay, he wasn't the type to be impressed. I sat next to him to show him my foot.
— I just cut myself...
— And yet there is no sign of an injury. How can that...?
Before he had the time to finish, I took his hand and placed it against my belly.
— Can you feel the difference?
His fingers traveled over the surface of my skin and stopped where my belly button should have been.
Последнее изменение было внесено пользователем lilian canale - 26 Июнь 2013 19:42





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26 Апрель 2013 16:13

RedShadow
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Hello,

I think the meaning is not very right.
I would propose something like the following:


Okay he wasn't the type to be easily impressed. I sat next to him to show him my foot.
— I cut myself a little while ago...
— And yet there is not a single cut mark. How can this...?
Before he had time to finish, I took his hand and placed it on my belly.
— You feel the difference?
His fingers traveled over my skin and stopped right where my navel should have been.


Please discuss



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26 Апрель 2013 17:51

Francky5591
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Hi RedShadow!

Your translation sounds more natural, less literal (eg : "very well" )than Kai Tachikawa1's, but as I'm not a native speaker of the English language I can't assume you're right and she's wrong.

There are two "l" at "travelled" I checked here

These are my two cents




25 Июнь 2013 15:57

lilian canale
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I've made a few edits. Could you please check them out and vote at the poll?

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25 Июнь 2013 18:17

Francky5591
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OK, it seems to be fine, but there are still two "l" at "travelled"

25 Июнь 2013 18:30

lilian canale
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Hi Francky,

Both spellings are accepted nowadays, one more used in America and the other in Britain.

25 Июнь 2013 23:57

Francky5591
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OK then, I left my vote in green

26 Июнь 2013 08:55

ja.goris
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In the third line: 'How is that' .... instead of 'How can that ....'to introduce 'How is that possible'.