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שלום, ברצוני להודות על ההזמנדות שניתנה לי להמשיך...
Kaynak dil: İbranice

שלום,
ברצוני להודות על ההזדמנות שניתנה לי להמשיך וללמוד.

אני אם חד הורית בת 45 אשר מאז ומתמיד רצתה להתחיל ולסיים ללמוד לתואר.

התואר אותו בכוונתי ללמוד הינו במדעי החברה והרוח ובעזרתו לתרום לקהילה ידע ויכולת התנהלות טובה יותר

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Hello,

I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to continue my studies.

I am a 45-year-old single mother, and my lifelong wish has been to complete an academic degree.

I intend to study for a degree in the Humanities and Social Science fields, which will allow me to contribue to the community with better knowledge and qualifications.

A scholarship like the one I received, awards students an opportunity to enrich themselves, regardless of their age, marital status, background, religion, or gender, and through this, to enrich their close environment and society at large.

Once again, thank you,
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En son lilian canale tarafından onaylandı - 19 Eylül 2011 23:20





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1 Eylül 2011 20:11

lilian canale
Mesaj Sayısı: 14972
Hi libera,

This looks great, however I'd just check a couple of details:

1 - "...my lifelong wish had (has? ) been to complete (obtain? ) an academic degree"

2 - "...which will allow me to give (come? ) back to the community with better knowledge.."

1 Eylül 2011 22:52

libera
Mesaj Sayısı: 257
1. correction is fine, same meaning, although i'm not sure if the writer doesn't specifically use "complete" deliberately(we can ask her, if it matters)
2. the writer says she would like to "give back" to the community, hence 'come' would be the wrong word.

1 Eylül 2011 22:58

lilian canale
Mesaj Sayısı: 14972
Please, ask her about that.
About #2, 'give back' needs an object (give back what? )

2 Eylül 2011 06:26

libera
Mesaj Sayısı: 257
well, she's using "giving back" in the sense of contributing her new skills and knowledge to the community. I don't know if that's formal usage but it's very common these days. I just googled "give back to the community" (without an object) and got 38M results (and that's without 'giving back', just 'give back'). You can change it to something else if you feel the need, as long as it means that she will be able to contribute her new skills and knowledge to the community.
Re #1, this is a letter thanking someone for a scholarship, which was requested three weeks ago. I have this hunch that the request was filled in a different way long ago, and she won't really be interested in our queries at this stage. In any case, if you feel it's more correct, you can use obtain instead of complete. I really don't think it matters.

2 Eylül 2011 18:09

Shahar368
Mesaj Sayısı: 25
I'd say the word for word translation for that part would be 'contribute knowledge and better functioning/organizing abilities to the community'. And I think there are way too many commas.

7 Eylül 2011 18:26

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אני חושבת שהמשפט "התואר אותו בכוונתי ללמוד הינו במדעי החברה והרוח ובעזרתו לתרום לקהילה ידע ויכולת התנהלות טובה יותר"
לא תורגם בצורה מדוייקת.
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"which will allow me to contribue to the community with better knowledge and qualifications"