Tercüme - Türkçe-İngilizce - Emrah AÄŸlaya AÄŸlaya

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Emrah AÄŸlaya AÄŸlaya

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Kaynak dil: Türkçe

Åžu daÄŸlarÄ±n ardÄ± bahar dediler
YÃ¼rÃ¼dÃ¼m yÃ¼rÃ¼dÃ¼m eriÅŸemedim
Her kul kaderini yaÅŸar dediler
Derdimi kimselye bÃ¶lÃ¼ÅŸemedim

Hep yalnÄ±z yaÅŸadÄ±m acÄ±larÄ±mÄ±
Yar hasretin bÃ¶ldÃ¼ uykularÄ±mÄ±
Bir dosta aÃ§Ä±pta duygularÄ±mÄ±
AÄŸlaya aÄŸlaya anlatamadÄ±m

Ne Ã¼mitler vardÄ±
BoÅŸa taÅŸÄ±dÄ±m ne Ã§ileler gÃ¶rdÃ¼m
Neler yaÅŸadÄ±m hep yokuÅŸta koÅŸtum
ArtÄ±k usandÄ±m
AÅŸkÄ±n menziline ulaÅŸamadÄ±m

Başlık	Emrah - Crying while Crying
Tercüme İngilizce Çeviri yenerunver	Hedef dil: İngilizce They said spring is behind those mountains I walked and walked, but didn't reach it Every human being lives his own fate, they said I couldn't share any of my worries with anyone I have always lived my sorrows alone Missing you disrupts my sleep, my love I couldn't share my feelings With a dear friend, crying while crying There were hopes That I had resulting in nothing but pain I had some life, always running uphill I'm done now I couldn't reach the destination of love
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En son Lein tarafından onaylandı - 10 Aralık 2010 15:32

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		8 Aralık 2010 16:02
	Lein Mesaj Sayısı: 3389	Hi yenerunver Me again I have made a few small changes - see if you agree! Some things I wasn't quite sure about: I walked and walked, but didn't reach - didn't reach what? The mountains or spring? There were hopes that I had for nothing but pain - what does this mean? Was he hoping for pain? Or did the hopes result in pain? the range of love - could you explain this in different words? Sorry for all the questions! Thanks again for your help
		8 Aralık 2010 17:27
	yenerunver Mesaj Sayısı: 15	'didn't reach the spring' is what I meant, but I didn't use the word 'spring' because the previous sentence is about the spring. I thought using it twice is unnecessary, but your choice I used 'for' to mean that hopes result in pain, but if you think there is a grammar mistake you can change it, of course I can't think another word for 'menzil' because it means 'range' in Turkish, but again if you have a better word in your mind I'll be happy to hear it.
		9 Aralık 2010 17:55
	Lein Mesaj Sayısı: 3389	Thanks, I have set a poll Turkish experts, can any of you think of a word to translate 'menzil' here? I am not sure but I don't think 'range' is quite right. Thanks! CC: handyy Sunnybebek cheesecake
		9 Aralık 2010 10:39
	merdogan Mesaj Sayısı: 3769	They said there is spring behind those mountains...> They said, behind those mountains is spring Line 2 , I think, "I walked and walked, but didn't arrive " is better. "menzil" can be also "destination". I couldn't arrive the destination of love. That I had resulting in nothing but pain...> I moved in vain, I lived only sufferings (?)
		9 Aralık 2010 17:59
	Lein Mesaj Sayısı: 3389	Hi yenerunver I'm not sure merdogan's suggestion for the second line is much different; I have slightly changed the first line according to merdogan's suggestion. I think I like your last line better than merdogan's suggestion and I think the meaning is pretty similar. Would you agree with 'destination' for 'menzil'? It seems to make sense in English! Thanks!
		9 Aralık 2010 22:56
	yenerunver Mesaj Sayısı: 15	I agree with merdogan, 'destination' seems better.