proofreading

Hello,
I am a teacher in Pergomon,Turkey.I have written a few short paraghraphs in English and I need to have them proofread.Can anyone here help me?

eddkzk, i'll try to help you just send them to me, if i can help i'll reply as soon as i can , If nobody else already did, and if you still need them, cause i see you wrote a while ago