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569Umseting - Enskt-Danskt - Each small candle

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Umbidnar umsetingar: Literary Chinese

Bólkur Songur

Hendan umbidna umseting er "Bert meining".
Heiti
Each small candle
Tekstur
Framborið av Rumo
Uppruna mál: Enskt

Not the torturer will scare me
Nor the body's final fall
Nor the barrels of death's rifles
Nor the shadows on the wall
Nor the night when to the ground
The last dim star of pain is hurled
But the blind indifference
Of a merciless unfeeling world

And each small candle
Lights a corner of the dark...
Viðmerking um umsetingina
From a song by Roger Waters
Source: http://www.roger-waters.com/candle.html

Please keep sense and meaning, translations have not necessarily got to be as poetical (but if you have nice lyrical ideas, don't hesitate to use them).^^





Heiti
Hvert lille lys
Umseting
Danskt

Umsett av PennyLane
Ynskt mál: Danskt

Det er ikke torturen der vil skræmme mig
Heller ikke kroppens sidste fald
Heller ikke løbet af dødens gevær
Heller ikke skyggerne på muren
Heller ikke natten, når til jorden
Den sidste svage stjerne af smerte er kastet
Men den blinde ligegyldighed
Af en ubarmhjertig ufølende verden

Og hvert lille lys
Oplyser et hjørne af mørket...
Góðkent av wkn - 23 Apríl 2007 13:37





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5 November 2013 01:10

sismo
Tal av boðum: 74
In Danish "the torturer" cannot be translated with "torturen", since this is "the torture" (the act) and not the person performing it, which is "tortøren". Likewise "barrels" and "rifles" should be translated in plural to "løbene" and "geværer" and not only in singular as here. The word "Heller" can be left out entirely as can also the two first words "Det er" and the fifth word "der". In Danish poetry it is not normal to use capital letters in the beginning of each line. "Dim" may be better translated with the Danish word "tågede" (hazy, misty, foggy) rather than with "svage" (weak). I think "is hurled" should be translated "smides" (is thrown), "kastes" (is thrown), "kastes af sted" (is thrown off) or "hvirvles væk" (is hurled away).