Ben 45 yaşındayım. İşim doktor. Evliyim. 2 çocuğum var. Biri kız biri oğlan. Kızımın adı songül, oğlumunki Hüseyin. Kızım 11,oğlum 15 yaşındadır. Bu devirde her şey var. Şimdi ışınlanma bile var. Arabalar uçuyor. Ucak yok. Buradan Ankara 5sn.eski arkadaşlarımdan kimse yok. Benim arabam var. Markası el arabası. Ben kansere bile çözüm buldum
I am 45 years old. I'm a doctor. I am married with two children. One is a girl and the other one is a boy. My daughter's name is Songül and my son's name is Hüseyin. Songül is 11 and Hüseyin is 15. There is everything in this age. There is even molecular transportation now. The cars are able to fly. There are no planes. It takes 5 second from here to Ankara. None of my old friends are alive. I have a car. It's trademark is wheelbarrow. I have even found a solution to the cancer.
Viðmerking um umsetingina
I have changed all future sentences to the present tense..:((
Each time you reject a translation, a new request for the same language is submitted. You rejected this one twice, and this is the 3rd translation. This often occurs if the source text is not very clear or not very easy to translate.
You should not have used future tense sirinler, that won't do! and it's three times now I tell this: it's not "IRRADIATION", it's "MOLECULAR TRANSPORTATION"! it's talking about the way of travelling in future, not about "irradiation"
besides, this is not a difficult text to translate , the translators would make better if they had lended an ear to suggestions made so far
anyway, I'll take the admin switch off and you should edit your work sirinler
I am sad, because, both Dramati and Smy are angry with me for "Molecular Transportation" and for not doing what they have said.But there is something else they should know.If they write as a message, I do whatever they say.But when they say it under the discussion part of the translation, I may not do it.Because, I don't look at the below of my translations whether there are advices or not all the time.
And this is the first time I have seen a suggestion,"Molecular Transportation" .As you see, when I see it, I have immediately corrected it.
I'm (also) not angry with you sirinler! I was talking about the other two translators and I didn't know you don't always look at the discussions under the translations. I thought everybody first looks into their mailbox (gmail or something else) before logging in here (I work this way and am always kept informed of the discussions under my translations)! Don't worry, now I'll make a few more edits (with your permisson dramati ) and dramati will have a look again
"I am 45 years old and a doctor.I am married with two children.They are a girl and a boy. My daughter's name is Songül and my son's name is Hüseyin. Songül is and Hüseyin is 15 years old. There is everything during this era. There is a Molecular Transportation. The cars are flying. There are no planes. It takes only 5 minutes to go to Ankara from here. There are none of my old friends. I have a car. It is a "wheelbarrow". I have also found a solution to the cancer."