Übersetzung - Hebräisch-Englisch - - המוות הופך את כולנו למלאכים ומעניק לכולנו...

Hi CK

It's me again

The English is very good I'm just not very sur about the "soft as the talons of the crow" bit. I would have thought that a crow's talons would be hard and spiny, not soft.

I've set a poll, because I don't speak any hebrew, either.

Bises
Tantine

I agree with Tantine - and "Death" should not be preceded by "the".

2 small corrections:
"soft" is not the translation for "חלקות"- smooth is more to the point; also wouldn't use "convert", but "make", but that's an English issue really.

I have to agree with libera (how does one make a link to a user?) on the issue of smooth talons.

C.K., you need to edit your translation according to the suggestions above.

ollka, I think that only experts and administrators can cc other users. But libera already made her point, and she did not check the "Notify me when a reply is posted", so I don't think she needs to be cc'ed.

What I meant was, how to make a name show up as a user name, with a link to their profile etc.
Nevermind, it's not that important

חלקות זה smooth
רך זה soft

ollka, you can do it this way:


[ link=http://www.cucumis.org/members_1_u/profile_p_143500.html ] ollka [ /link ]

(take out all spaces)

Where is C.K.?

thanks!

soft is not translated correctlz

Tantine, C.K. has shown no interest in correcting his work, so I think you should reject this translation and give someone else a chance.

Hi Kafetzou

I agree with you, and it is not the only translation he seems to have "abandonned".

Hi all

How can I edit it again

C.K.

Sorry - too late - it's been rejected.