Перевод - Иврит-Английский - שמי אורלי בתפקידי האחרון הייתי מנהלת כנסים...

Hi Orly, Hi CK

You should prefer "post" to position => "in my previous post"

"gathering" would be more understandable with a final "s".

"In my position domain" seems to be superfluous here, so do you really want to keep it Orly?

You should take out the "the" before "human resource", which doesn't need the final "s". The word "will" doesn't take a capital unless you are talking about the "Last Will and Testament" lol.

The text would look like this (I've put in bold the changes I'm suggesting:

My name is Orly. In my previous post, I was a gatherings and events manager for factories and other organizations. I was responsible for human resource communications, putting forward price suggestions and follow-up, working with different suppliers and managing the events based on the clients will.

Let me know what you both think. The English is very good, so I've set a poll already!

Bises
Tantine

Hello Orly, CK and Tantine!
I did say I thought this was correct, but it looks unpolished (lol at Will though).
I think "domain" can be rephrased to say "my position included", if Orly wants to keep the original wording.
Well done CK, beautiful translations

Hi CK

Could you please do the edits on th

Hi CK

Could you please do the edits on this text as per my suggestions? I also think that you should replace the word "will" by "wishes".

Hi Olka

In English it is more appropriate to use the word "post" in this context. As you can see above, I rephrased "domain" simply by removing it

Keeping the original wording is not possible since it was badly turned

A few things don't work here. First it says that I was responsible for contact with HR managers, and not responsible for human-resources communications. Other than that it works for me though

שביעות רצונו של הלקוח.
is better translated:
client's satisfaction (NOT clients Will)

הוסיפו את המילה "מנהל" בתרגום העברי באופן מיותר

Hi Dramati , hi all

Thanks for your contributions. But since CK seems to have abandonned his translation, I will have to reject it so as someone else can do it.

Bises
Tantine